Friday 2 September 2016

My 360 poem

Hi guys,this is my poem.I have entered this in a competition so i thought it would be just as good to share it with you.                                                       
I came 2nd in the competition.
A big thanks to Mrs Sheehan the wonderful lady that made sure it made sense and the right punctuation.

1 comment:

  1. Sami you are a star!!🌟
    I loved your poem! It made me feel as though I was actually there experiencing each description.

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